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		<title>Summer Writing Prompts for Children</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Writing Prompts and Story Ideas – Summer Be sure to learn more about how to use writing prompts with students here: 1. Using Writing Prompts with Kids: Tips, Tricks, Pros and Cons of Writing Prompts 2. How to Use Writing Prompts in Teaching Writing Wishing you and your students total essay writing success! Have a great summer! Summertime [...]]]></description>
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<h3><span style="color: #ff0000;"><strong>Writing Prompts and Story Ideas – Summer</strong></span></h3>
<p>Be sure to learn more about how to use writing prompts with students here:</p>
<p>1. <a href="http://patternbasedwriting.com/elementary_writing_success/using-writing-prompts-with-kids-tips-tricks-pros-cons-of-writing-prompts/" target="_blank">Using Writing Prompts with Kids</a>: Tips, Tricks, Pros and Cons of Writing Prompts</p>
<p>2. <a href="http://patternbasedwriting.com/elementary_writing_success/how-to-use-writing-prompts-in-teaching-writing/" target="_self">How to Use Writing Prompts in Teaching Writing</a></p>
<h5>Wishing you and your students total essay writing success! Have a great summer!</h5>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Cause and Effect Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• My lazy days cause my parents to…<br />
• It gets hotter and hotter and hotter and pretty soon everyone is…<br />
• I goofed off all school year and now I pay the price in summer.<br />
• I worked hard all school year and my parents are really proud of my effort. Now it’s summer.<br />
• Cause and effect of a sunburn.<br />
• Kids have summer vacation, what is the effect for the parents?<br />
• In the pool and at the beach all day, what’s the effect?</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Persuasive Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• Summer should be equal in length to the school year.<br />
• Parents must not over program kids during the summer. Summer is our time to relax.<br />
• In this modern age, summer vacation is too long and should be reduced to something more reasonable.<br />
• Summer vacation should be a time for self-learning as opposed to guided learning. Students must engage in learning activities over the summer.<br />
• Summertime is fun time. No work! All fun!<br />
• Families must take at least one family vacation during the summer.<br />
• This is how you should spend your summer…<br />
• Going to camp is terrible, or going to camp is great!</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Process Essay / How-To Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><span id="more-599"></span>• Step-by-step guide to having fun in the sun.<br />
• How to eat a Popsicle in the summertime heat without dripping a drop.<br />
• How to make sure your parents know how you want to spend your summer vacation.<br />
• How to plan out your summer.<br />
• How to have fun at the beach.<br />
• How to stay cool on hot, hot days.<br />
• Steps to making your parents happy during the summer.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Argumentative Ess</span></strong>ay</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• The real purpose of summer vacation is…<br />
• Summer is better than winter…</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Evaluation Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• How summer vacation affects students’ mental attitude for the following year.<br />
• How summer vacation has changed from when the summer was based on the agricultural growing cycle.<br />
• Is summer vacation an outdated tradition that is not valid in these modern times?<br />
• Who needs summer vacation more, teachers or students?</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Narrative/ Personal Narrative Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• Remembering summers past.<br />
• A special summer vacation family trip.<br />
• The greatest summer ever.<br />
• My family, my friends, and me… all summer long.<br />
• When the air conditioner broke.<br />
• My parents put me to work.<br />
• Fun times.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Informational Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• History of summer vacation.<br />
• Summer vacation through the ages.<br />
• Things you can do to keep busy over summer vacation.<br />
• Fun ways of learning over summer vacation.<br />
• Different kinds of summer camp.<br />
• Summer around the world<br />
• Movies about hot summers.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Descriptive Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• It was a hot and humid night…<br />
• Describe how it feels on the hottest day of summer.<br />
• See, hear, feel, and taste all summer long.<br />
• Describe how summer is.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Five-Paragraph Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• Three things you must absolutely do in the summer.<br />
• The three stages of summer.<br />
• Summer days &#8211; morning, afternoon, and nighttime.<br />
• Three reasons summer is…<br />
• Summer with friends, family, and camp.<br />
• Working, playing, and learning… all summer long.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Compare and Contrast Essay</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• Summer for kids compared to summer for adults.<br />
• Summer before air conditioning compared to summer now.<br />
• A working summer compared to a fun summer.<br />
• My perfect summer compared to how my parents want me to spend my summer.<br />
• Summertime for young kids compared to summertime for older kids.<br />
• This summer compared to last summer.<br />
• What makes summer good? What makes summer bad?<br />
• Summer for teachers vs. summer for students</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Summertime Story Ideas</span></strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">• Back on the farm, on the hot summer days…<br />
• The Global Warming Summer of Dry, Hot, Heat<br />
• An amazing summer with dolphins.<br />
• Splish, Splash, Crash!<br />
• Warning: Record Heat!<br />
• The Snowy Summer<br />
• Straight A’s and Fun!</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Have a great summer!</span></strong></p>
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		<title>How to Help Your Children Improve Their Writing</title>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h5>Transform your child into a truly confident author using “Pattern Based Writing: Quick and Easy Essay!</h5>
<p><strong><em>Should you help your child with writing?</em></strong> YES. The Office of Educational Research and Improvement (OERI) suggests that you help your child with writing. OERI believes you, a parent, can make a big difference. You can use helping strategies that are simple and fun. You can use them to help your child learn to write well&#8211;and to enjoy doing it!</p>
<p><strong>Helping your child with writing will help your child to:</strong><br />
• Do well in school<br />
• Enjoy self-expression<br />
• Become more self-reliant</p>
<p>You know how important writing will be to your child&#8217;s life. It will be important from first-grade through college and throughout adulthood.</p>
<p>Unfortunately, &#8220;many schools are unable to give children sufficient instruction in writing.&#8221; There are various reasons: teachers aren&#8217;t trained to teach writing skills, writing classes may be too large, it&#8217;s often difficult to measure writing skills, etc.</p>
<p>Study after study shows that students&#8217; writing lacks clarity, coherence, and organization. Only a few students can write persuasive essays or competent business letters. As many as one out of four have serious writing difficulties. And students say they like writing less and less as they go through school.</p>
<h3>Things to Know about Student Writing</h3>
<p><span id="more-590"></span>Writing is more than putting words on paper. It&#8217;s a final stage in the complex process of communicating that begins with &#8220;thinking.&#8221; Writing is an especially important stage in communication, the intent being to leave no room for doubt. Has any country ratified a verbal treaty?</p>
<p>One of the first means of communication for your child is through drawing. Do encourage the child to draw and to discuss his/her drawings. Ask questions: What is the boy doing? Does the house look like ours? Can you tell a story about this picture?</p>
<p>Most children&#8217;s basic speech patterns are formed by the time they enter school. By that time children speak clearly, recognize most letters of the alphabet, and may try to write. Show an interest in, and ask questions about, the things your child says, draws, and may try to write.</p>
<p><strong>Writing well requires:<br />
• Clear thinking.</strong> Sometimes the child needs to have his/her memory refreshed about a past event in order to write about it.<br />
<strong>• Sufficient time.</strong> Children may have `stories in their heads&#8217; but need time to think them through and write them down. School class periods are often not long enough.<br />
<strong>• Reading.</strong> Reading can stimulate a child to write about his/her own family or school life. If your child reads good books, (s)he will be a better writer.<br />
<strong>• A Meaningful Task.</strong> A child needs meaningful, not artificial writing tasks. You&#8217;ll find suggestions for such tasks in the section, &#8220;Things To Do.&#8221;<br />
<strong>• Interest.</strong> All the time in the world won&#8217;t help if there is nothing to write, nothing to say. Some of the reasons for writing include: sending messages, keeping records, expressing feelings, or relaying information.<br />
<strong>• Practice.</strong> And more practice.<br />
<strong>• Revising.</strong> Students need experience in revising their work&#8211; i.e, seeing what they can do to make it clearer, more descriptive, more concise, etc.</p>
<h3>Pointers for Parents in Helping Their Child Write Better</h3>
<p>In helping your child to learn to write well, remember that your goal is to make writing easier and more enjoyable.</p>
<p><strong>Provide a place.</strong> It&#8217;s important for a child to have a good place to write&#8211;a desk or table with a smooth, flat surface and good lighting.</p>
<p><strong>Have the materials.</strong> Provide plenty of paper&#8211;lined and unlined&#8211;and things to write with, including pencils, pens, and crayons.</p>
<p><strong>Allow time.</strong> Help your child spend time thinking about a writing project or exercise. Good writers do a great deal of thinking. Your child may dawdle, sharpen a pencil, get papers ready, or look up the spelling of a word. Be patient&#8211;your child may be thinking.</p>
<p><strong>Respond.</strong> Do respond to the ideas your child expresses verbally or in writing. Make it clear that you are interested in the true function of writing which is to convey ideas. This means focusing on &#8220;what&#8221; the child has written, not &#8220;how&#8221; it was written. It&#8217;s usually wise to ignore minor errors, particularly at the stage when your child is just getting ideas together.</p>
<p><strong>Don&#8217;t you write it!</strong> Don&#8217;t write a paper for your child that will be turned in as his/her work. Never rewrite a child&#8217;s work. Meeting a writing deadline, taking responsibility for the finished product, and feeling ownership of it are important parts of writing well.</p>
<p><strong>Praise.</strong> Take a positive approach and say something good about your child&#8217;s writing. Is it accurate? Descriptive? Thoughtful? Interesting? Does it say something?</p>
<h3>Things to Do to Help Your Child Write Better</h3>
<p><strong>Make it real.</strong> Your child needs to do real writing. It&#8217;s more important for the child to write a letter to a relative than it is to write a one-line note on a greeting card. Encourage the child to write to relatives and friends. Perhaps your child would enjoy corresponding with a pen pal.</p>
<p><strong>Suggest note-taking.</strong> Encourage your child to take notes on trips or outings and to describe what (s)he saw. This could include a description of nature walks, a boat ride, a car trip, or other events that lend themselves to note-taking.</p>
<p><strong>Brainstorm.</strong> Talk with your child as much as possible about his/her impressions and encourage the child to describe people and events to you. If the child&#8217;s description is especially accurate and colorful, say so.</p>
<p><strong>Encourage keeping a journal.</strong> This is excellent writing practice as well as a good outlet for venting feelings. Encourage your child to write about things that happen at home and school, about people (s)he likes or dislikes and why, things to remember or things the child wants to do. Especially encourage your child to write about personal feelings&#8211;pleasures as well as disappointments. If the child wants to share the journal with you, read the entries and discuss them&#8211;especially the child&#8217;s ideas and perceptions.</p>
<p><strong>Write together.</strong> Have your child help you with letters, even such routine ones as ordering items from an advertisment or writing to a business firm. This helps the child to see firsthand that writing is important to adults and truly useful.</p>
<p><strong>Use games.</strong> There are numerous games and puzzles that help a child to increase vocabulary and make the child more fluent in speaking and writing. Remember, building a vocabulary builds confidence. Try crossword puzzles, word games, anagrams and cryptograms de- signed especially for children. Flash cards are good, too, and they&#8217;re easy to make at home.</p>
<p><strong>Suggest making lists.</strong> Most children like to make lists just as they like to count. Encourage this. Making lists is good practice and helps a child to become more organized. Boys and girls might make lists of their records, tapes, baseball cards, dolls, furniture in a room, etc. They could include items they want. It&#8217;s also good practice to make lists of things to do, schoolwork, dates for tests, social events, and other reminders.</p>
<p><strong>Encourage copying.</strong> If a child likes a particular song, suggest learning the words by writing them down&#8211;replaying the song on your stereo/tape player or jotting down the words whenever the song is played on a radio program. Also encourage copying favorite poems or quotations from books and plays.</p>
<h4>In order to transform your child into a confident author, be sure to check out the “<a title="Fantastic Writing Program!" href="http://patternbasedwriting.com/" target="_self">Pattern Based Writing: Quick and Easy Essay” school and home study program</a>.</h4>
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		<description><![CDATA[You and your students have worked hard on writing all year… and now it’s time to make sure it gets all the credit it deserves. Sometimes mandated writing rubrics can have harsh consequences… because sometimes fantastic writing misses the mark when it comes to the rubric. The goal here is to not only to improve [...]]]></description>
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<p>You and your students have worked hard on writing all year… and now it’s time to make sure it gets all the credit it deserves. Sometimes mandated writing rubrics can have harsh consequences… because sometimes fantastic writing misses the mark when it comes to the rubric.</p>
<p>The goal here is to <span style="text-decoration: underline;">not only</span> to improve overall writing skills but also to <span style="text-decoration: underline;">hit a bull’s-eye</span> when it comes to the writing rubric. Almost all writing rubrics will contain the basic topics found here.</p>
<p><strong>1. Address the writing prompt and stay on target:<br />
</strong>• How on target is the writing? What is being asked for in the prompt?<br />
• Do the titles for your students’ essays contain any words from the writing prompt?<br />
• Are the words used in the writing prompt sprinkled throughout the essay?<br />
• How can the writing be on target if students don’t use <span style="text-decoration: underline;">any</span> of the words from the writing prompt in either the <span style="text-decoration: underline;">title or the essay</span>?</p>
<p><strong>2. Make sure students have an understanding of big picture essay structure and organization. Their essay needs to demonstrate a clear beginning, middle and ending. Students need to have an understanding of how paragraphs flow throughout an essay:<br />
</strong>• Introduction &#8211; Idea 1 &#8211; Idea 2 &#8211; Idea 3 &#8211; Conclusion<br />
• Introduction &#8211; First – Then &#8211; Finally &#8211; Conclusion<br />
• Introduction &#8211; Cause &#8211; Effect &#8211; Conclusion <br />
• Introduction – Cause/Effect #1 &#8211; Cause/Effect #2 &#8211; Conclusion <br />
• Introduction – Cause #1 – Effect #1 &#8211; Cause #2 – Effect #2 &#8211; Conclusion<br />
• Introduction &#8211; Problem &#8211; Solution &#8211; Conclusion  (See Cause/Effect for more variations)<br />
• Introduction &#8211; Similarities &#8211; Differences &#8211; Conclusion  (See Cause/Effect for more variations)<br />
• Once Upon a Time – Rising Action – Rising Action – Climax – and They (or I) Lived Happily Ever After</p>
<p><strong><span id="more-569"></span>3. Plan, Write, and Revise –</strong> Students must allow <span style="text-decoration: underline;">at least a little time</span> for each of these. Cover the concept of breaking up their allowed time. (Plan 15% Write 70% Revise 15%) If students don’t spend at least a little time in each area, it’s unlikely their writing will be as good as it can be.</p>
<p><strong>4. Sentence Varity –</strong> A simple way to bring about sentence variety is to focus on <span style="text-decoration: underline;">how sentences start</span>. It’s amazing how quickly these simple and fun sentence starting patterns can transform student writing. Kids like them. They bring a lot of rhythm, flow, and beauty to language… without a lot of rules. </p>
<p><strong>Nine Fun Ways to Start Sentences<br />
1. -ly Beginnings -</strong> <span style="text-decoration: underline;">Surprisingly</span>, my parents liked the clubhouse I had built in our backyard.<br />
<strong>2.  Prepositional Phrase Beginnings –</strong> <span style="text-decoration: underline;">Beyond the moon</span>, laid infinite possibilities for exploration.<br />
<strong>3. Two Adverb Beginnings -</strong> <span style="text-decoration: underline;">Fast and furious</span>, the little mouse scurried towards the cake.<br />
<strong>4. Two Adjective Beginnings-</strong>  <span style="text-decoration: underline;">Beautiful and elegant</span>, the princess bride descended the stairs.<br />
<strong>5. -ing Beginnings -</strong> <span style="text-decoration: underline;">Falling</span> down the garbage chute, Billy started to wonder if he had made a wise decision.<br />
<strong>6. -ing in the Middle -</strong> I brought my secret stash of money to the fair, <span style="text-decoration: underline;">hoping</span> no one would stop me from spending every last cent of it.<br />
<strong>7. Balanced Sentence Structure</strong> (Items in a series/ Parallel structure) – <span style="text-decoration: underline;">Eating ice-cream, watching TV, and wrestling tigers</span> may be fun… but they are not healthy activities.<br />
 <strong>8. Appositives</strong> (Insert information or explanation) &#8211; Shark Cove, <span style="text-decoration: underline;">the place where all the sharks hang out</span>, is not a place I like to go swimming.<br />
<strong>9. Dependent Clauses –</strong> <span style="text-decoration: underline;">After the storm had ended</span>, the sun began to break through the cloudy gloom.</p>
<p><strong>5. Don’t Mix First Person and Third Person &#8211; The way students begin their writing is the way they will need to finish their writing.</strong> It’s best if students make a conscious choice right at the beginning of their essay. However, this is often doesn’t happen.  Late in the essay process, it’s often better if students simply focus on how they began their essay and continue forward using that same point of view.<br />
<strong>Example:::</strong> <br />
<strong>Student started with third person:<br />
</strong>• “More and more people are developing a deep concern for protecting the environment.”<br />
• “The government has started to enforce stricter environmental laws.”<br />
<strong>Student wants to switch to first person:<br />
</strong>• “I feel it is a person’s duty to help protect the environment.”<br />
• “Everyone in my family recycles.”<br />
<strong>Student should continue with third person:<br />
</strong>• “Many people feel it is a person’s duty to help protect the environment.”<br />
• “Studies show that more and more families are recycling.”</p>
<p><strong>6. More Random Tips:<br />
• Make</strong> sure the introduction contains a clear thesis statement. A thesis statement is a clear, explicit statement defining the purpose of the essay.<br />
<strong>• Along</strong> with a clear thesis… see if you can also have a clear “hook.” (Curiosity, pose a question, pose a challenge, or pose a problem.)  <br />
<strong>• Have</strong> specific transitions between paragraphs. It’s best if there is some variety in the transitions.<br />
<strong>• Students</strong> should demonstrate that they know who their audience is. Language, vocabulary, and tone all reveal who the author is talking to.<br />
<strong>• Demonstrate</strong> purpose. Using the words “persuade” and “inform” can be a bit obvious, but they are effective. Have students consider all the possible synonyms they can use to be <span style="text-decoration: underline;">secretly effective</span>. (Convince, facts, knowledge, information, data, report, statistics…) <br />
<strong>• Give</strong> relevant supporting details. What’s relevant? Give value with every detail. Eliminate everything that does not give value.<br />
<strong>• Details</strong> support, prove, clarify, explain, and give information about the topic sentences. If all else fails… focus on “<span style="text-decoration: underline;">prove it</span>.” For centuries kids have said “prove it.” Having to prove something makes sense to them. “I had fun at the park.” Prove it. “Okay. I went with my best friend. We played soccer. My mom made a great picnic. I REST MY CASE.” <br />
<strong>• Do</strong> not make the details sound like a list.<br />
<strong>• Have</strong> the conclusion readdress the prompt and more explicitly state the thesis.<br />
<strong>• Uses</strong> Standard English grammar, mechanics, and sentence structure. Use formal language. Students are not talking to their buddy out on the playground.<br />
<strong>• Don’t</strong> repeat ideas and sentences. Each sentence communicates a unique idea.<br />
<strong>• Don’t</strong> generalize. Compare “Peace would be good.” Vs. “Elimination of all war, hatred, and intolerance would be fantastic.”<br />
<strong>• Have</strong> paragraphs end with a conclusion sentence. Beginning, middle ending… beginning, middle…<br />
<strong>• Don’t</strong> add new information in the conclusion.<br />
<strong>• Every</strong> sentence should either be “simple and concise” or “a work of art.” Alternate between these two types of sentences.  <br />
<strong>• Write neat!</strong></p>
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<p>I once taught a 5th grade G.A.T.E. class at a very affluent school for the final two months of the school year.  It was my off-track vacation time and their teacher could not finish the year. I had never seen students like these before. These kids openly, in fact brazenly did the math when receiving an assignment. They cared about the writing assignment exactly as much as the math told them to care about it.</p>
<p><strong>These are the two “MATH QUESTIONS” that came out of their mouths NON-STOP:<br />
</strong>1. Is this graded?<br />
2. How much of our grade is it?</p>
<p>Depending on the answers to those two questions they would quickly determine how much they were going to invest in the assignment.</p>
<p><strong>They would decide:<br />
</strong>• I better get started on it now and I better do a great job. Also, I had better check my work for careless mistakes.<br />
<strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">Or</span></strong><br />
• I can goof off for 7 minutes and then quickly dash off the assignment. I’ll probably get an A, but if I get a B, it’s not that important because this one grade shouldn’t affect my overall grade.<br />
<strong><span style="text-decoration: underline;">Or</span></strong><br />
• This isn’t graded? Hey, Joe, what are you doing after school?</p>
<p>If it wasn’t graded… they didn’t care about the assignment. (It is different when a class has experienced multiple teachers but still… I had never done so much grading in my life. I learned a lot from that high-achieving G.A.T.E. class.)</p>
<h4><span style="color: #333399;">Struggling Students ALSO Do the MATH before they do the WRITING</span></h4>
<p><span id="more-536"></span>A lot of inner-city students, remedial students, ESL students, and students with learning disabilities also do the math before they start their writing assignment… and for them, they don’t like how it all adds up.</p>
<p>For them&#8230; it adds up to failure… so why get started?</p>
<p>I teach lots of kids in this latter category and I learned early in my teaching career that I have got to get them writing and I have got to get them <strong>writing fast</strong>. Quite simply, teaching students how to get an assignment, break it down, and then start and finish the assignment changes “the math” for them.</p>
<p>After they are “<strong>writing fast</strong>” I can layer all kinds of fantastic writing instruction on top of these core writing skills. With these core writing skills firmly in place, students seem to respond about 50% better to all the other writing instruction I layer on top.</p>
<p>With these core skills in place “<strong>THE MATH</strong>” has changed so students invest more. <strong>They are just like the G.AT.E. kids!</strong></p>
<h4><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><span style="color: #000000;">THEN ADD LAYERS OF DEPTH</span></span></h4>
<h4><span style="color: #333399;">Acting with an Accent&#8230; in Writing?</span></h4>
<p>In acting, an actor creates the character and then <strong>layers</strong> on the accent.  The accent is just like a hat or a costume that the actor will layer on over his character. <span style="text-decoration: underline;">The character </span>is supposed to be a real person, not an accent. What makes up a person who he is? It is all the things the person says, does, thinks, feels, and believes. In other words,<strong> the accent is not the character</strong>. The accent is simply <strong>a layer </strong>put on top of a person.</p>
<p>Poor actors think the accent is the character. With these actors it is very easy to see the accent. In fact, that is often all you can see. This makes it very difficult to see a real person underneath that accent.</p>
<p><strong>Most of the writing tips, writing tricks, and writing tools that are taught in school, really should be layered on top of a solid foundation.</strong></p>
<p><strong>The heart of teaching elementary students (and remedial writers in upper grades) how to be successful writers has to do with four aspects of writing:</strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">1. How to organize and structure writing<br />
2. How good writing is about good communication<br />
3. How to break down an assignment and get started<br />
4. How to get the job done in the time allowed</p>
<p><strong>Once students are comfortable with these skills, layering on more tips and tricks is easy!</strong></p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #333399;">Good writers and successful students have mastered how to receive an assignment, break it down, organize their thoughts and then quickly start and finish the assignment. In short, they can write fast!</span></strong></p>
<p>Be sure to read the next blog post on <strong>“<span style="color: #0000ff;"><a title="Teach Children to Write Faster" href="http://patternbasedwriting.com/elementary_writing_success/teaching-elementary-writing/teaching-children-to-write-fast-using-the-timed-writing-system/"><span style="color: #0000ff;">Teaching Children to Write FAST Using the Timed Writing System</span></a></span>.”</strong></p>
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<p>How has writing instruction changed over the last few decades? What are the most effective strategies for teaching writing? What is the difference between product and process when teaching writing? Which is more important? Read on to find out what some of the most important names in teaching writing research have to say!</p>
<h3>Teaching Writing: Changing Views over the Years</h3>
<p>The emphasis in writing instruction over the past forty years has shifted from product to process. This Digest will review the course and the primary features of this evolution.</p>
<p>In the early 1960s, the National Council of Teachers of English commissioned a study to find out what was known about the teaching of composition. The result was a report entitled &#8220;Research in Written Composition&#8221; by Braddock, Lloyd-Jones, and Schoer (1963), commonly known as &#8220;The Braddock Report.&#8221; The authors found only rudimentary understanding of the teaching of writing: &#8220;Some terms are being defined usefully, a number of other procedures are being refined, but the field as a whole is laced with dreams, prejudices, and makeshift operations&#8221; (p. 5).</p>
<h3>FROM PRODUCT TO PROCESS: THE 1970S AND 1980S</h3>
<p>Writing in 1986, Arthur Applebee pointed out that instruction in the past had been largely &#8220;prescriptive and product-centered,&#8221; stressing correct usage and mechanics while emphasizing &#8220;the traditional modes of discourse (narration, description, exposition, persuasion, and sometimes poetry).&#8221; However, the 1970s and 1980s saw &#8220;a groundswell of support for &#8216;process approaches&#8217; to learning to write&#8221; (p. 95). Today, the five-step approach to the writing process is widely accepted, along with related activities such as brainstorming, journal writing, teacher/student conferences, and an emphasis on multiple drafts.</p>
<p><span id="more-1213"></span>Looking back on the 1970s and early 1980s, Applebee found that three questions needed to be answered:</p>
<p>♦ How widely had they been adopted by that time?</p>
<p>♦ When adopted, how successfully were they implemented?</p>
<p>♦ When implemented, did they lead to noticeable improvement in student writing?</p>
<h3>PROCESS APPROACHES IN THE 1970S AND 1980S</h3>
<p>Although they dominated the professional literature, process approaches had not been fully implemented in all classrooms by the mid 1980s. Because less than half of student writing was done for the English teacher, assignments in English classes should not differ too much from other kinds of writing lest students &#8220;decide that what they learn in English is irrelevant to the rest of their writing&#8221; (p. 98). Furthermore, student writing too often focused on textbook material, with the emphasis on accuracy of recitation rather than on each student&#8217;s own thinking.</p>
<p>In 1986, Applebee found little use of process approaches to writing instruction. In particular, prewriting was often slighted and many papers did not progress beyond the first draft (p. 100). On the other hand, he did encounter terms such as &#8220;prewriting,&#8221; &#8220;revising,&#8221; and &#8220;editing&#8221; in textbooks, suggesting that increased use of such textbooks would lead to &#8220;more widespread attention to process-oriented activities&#8221; (p. 101). Applebee had also hoped to &#8220;develop a series of models of effective instruction&#8221; and to find evidence that efforts to use the process approach paid significant dividends. Instead, he found that he had been too optimistic; his studies pointed to &#8220;some serious problems in current conceptualizations of writing processes&#8221; (p. 102).</p>
<p>Some of these problems were rooted in the difficulties involved in helping students understand what real writers actually do. Often, activities included in process writing became separated from the purposes they were supposed to serve, preventing students from developing &#8220;a generalized conception of the &#8216;writing process&#8217; that the writers used in all contexts&#8221; (p. 102). Other problems arose from the fact that the process approach is not suited to every writing project: Some may require extensive prewriting, while others may require more careful editing and revision. Because students often ignore the great diversity of writing tasks, &#8220;process-oriented instruction easily degenerates into an inappropriate and lockstep formula&#8221; (p. 102).</p>
<p>Obviously, process-oriented instruction is of little value unless it makes a difference in student writing. A study undertaken by Hillocks (1982) analyzed &#8220;the results of experimental studies of writing instruction published between 1963 and 1982&#8243; (Applebee, 1986, p. 104). Hillocks considered four broad approaches: a) a product-oriented, teacher-centered mode of instruction; b) individualized instruction; c) natural process (an activity-based version of process-oriented instruction); and (d) the environmental mode, a structured process approach involving inquiry-based learning and group problem solving (adapted from Applebee, 1986, pp. 104-105).</p>
<p>Hillocks favored the &#8220;environmental mode&#8221; and said that the process-oriented approach was least effective of all. Applebee noted that each of the four approaches led to some improvement in writing achievement and that &#8220;the environmental mode that Hillocks champions is itself a version of process-oriented instruction and draws on a panoply of techniques he seems to be attacking&#8221; (1986, p. 105).</p>
<h3>RECONCEPTUALIZING THE PRINCIPLES OF PROCESS INSTRUCTION</h3>
<p>&#8220;Most instruction is based on the simple assumption that we can specify a curriculum by studying what experts do and teaching our students to do likewise&#8221; (p. 106). Process-oriented approaches were not effective in their early stages because they were based on mistaken notions of what writers do and of how the process should be taught. Applebee pointed out the need &#8220;to develop more adequate conceptualizations of both of these aspects of writing instruction&#8221; and specified the following criteria:</p>
<p><strong>1.</strong> Writing processes must be reconstrued as strategies that writers employ for particular purposes.</p>
<p><strong>2.</strong> For different tasks, writers will use different strategies, and for some tasks these strategies may involve no more than the routine production of a first and final draft.</p>
<p><strong>3.</strong> More extensive writing routines must be recognized as problem-solving heuristics appropriate to work-in-progress; they are unlikely to be so useful in writing about things (or in ways) the writer already knows well. (Applebee, 1986, p. 106)</p>
<h3>INSTRUCTIONAL SCAFFOLDING</h3>
<p>Another important aspect of process writing is the concept of instructional scaffolding, based on the belief that &#8220;learning is a process of gradual internalization of routines and procedures available to the learner from the social and cultural context in which the learning takes place&#8221; (p. 108). New skills are learned as children work on tasks that might be too difficult to undertake alone. Parents or teachers can ask questions and rephrase children&#8217;s comments to provide focus and direction. In the classroom, &#8220;The scaffolding provided is embedded in the materials of instruction (textbooks, assignments, direct instructional activities) as well as in the more immediate interactions between teacher and student&#8221; (p. 109).</p>
<p>Finally, Applebee discussed several aspects of instructional scaffolding that &#8220;suggest some of the features that a more comprehensive reconceptualization of teaching will require&#8221;: (a) allowing students to take a more active role; (b) building on students&#8217; knowledge while introducing challenging new material; (c) following a natural sequence of thought that helps students learn useful approaches to the task; (d) collaborating with students to help them solve problems; and (e) encouraging students to take increasing responsibility for their own learning (adapted from Applebee, 1986, p. 110).</p>
<p>Application of the preceding principles would result in more effective application of process-oriented approaches to writing.</p>
<p>♦ Students would be encouraged to choose their own topics whenever possible, and assignments would be expanded to allow students&#8217; opinions and solutions to play a part.</p>
<p>♦ Teachers would become interested readers and skilled editors of students&#8217; writing, not just evaluators.</p>
<p>♦ Emphasis would shift from students&#8217; knowledge about writing to strategies and procedures they need to deal with more and more challenging tasks. (p. 111)</p>
<h3>THE VIEW FROM THE 1980S AND 1990S</h3>
<p>In the early 1980s, Hairston (1982) asserted that writing instruction had undergone a &#8220;paradigm shift&#8221; as a result of research in the preceding decades. Some of the elements in the new paradigm include focusing on the writing process, with teacher intervention as needed, and teaching strategies for invention and discovery. Furthermore, writing is evaluated according to how well it fulfills the writer&#8217;s intentions, and writing is also considered a recursive rather than a linear process. Finally, writing is viewed as a way of learning and developing and as a disciplined creative activity that can be analyzed and described (adapted from Hairston, 1982; cited in Graves, 1999, p. 13).</p>
<p>Thirty years after publication of The Braddock Report, Jensen (1993) followed up on its findings by asking a number of experts to respond to this question: &#8220;What is the single most important thing that we as a profession know now that we didn&#8217;t know 30 years ago about the teaching and learning of writing in the elementary school?&#8221; After reviewing the 16 responses received, she reached these conclusions:</p>
<p>♦ Writing in the early years is a natural &#8220;gateway to literacy.&#8221;</p>
<p>♦ All children can be writers.</p>
<p>♦ Understanding writing and writers means understanding complex and interrelated influences&#8211;cognitive, social, cultural, psychological, linguistic, and technological.</p>
<p>♦ We write so that both we and others can know what we think.</p>
<p>(Jensen, 1993; cited in Graves, 1999, p. 26)</p>
<p>Elaborating on the first point, Peter Elbow of the University of Massachusetts said that very young children &#8220;can write anything they can say, whereas they can read only a fraction of the words they can say.&#8221; Therefore, &#8220;writing is easier, quicker, and, in a sense, more &#8216;natural&#8217; than reading&#8211;certainly more naturally learned&#8221; (Graves, 1999, p. 27). Concerning the idea that all children can be writers, Glenda L. Bissex of Northeastern University said that an expanded view of writing allows many more children to see themselves as writers. They include &#8220;not only the young poets and storytellers, but the inventive spellers who are working to understand and use our writing system, the children who write about dinosaurs and kittens&#8221; (p. 28).</p>
<p>Colette Daiute of the Harvard Graduate School of Education stressed that &#8220;gaining an interdisciplinary view of the myriad influences on writing will increase our ability to help children who have serious difficulties with literacy.&#8221; Susan Florio-Ruane of Michigan State University pointed out that &#8220;the forms and functions of literacy in school children&#8217;s lives transcend classroom reading and writing instruction.&#8221; We must consider &#8220;both the different home and community experiences children have around literacy and the nature (and limitations) of classrooms as places to learn and practice literacy&#8221; (Graves, 1999, pp. 28-29).</p>
<p><strong>REFERENCES</strong></p>
<p>Applebee, A. N. (1986). Problems in process approaches: Toward a reconceptualization of process instruction. In Petrosky and Bartholomae (Eds.), &#8220;The teaching of writing: Eighty-fifth yearbook of the National Society for the Study of Education&#8221;, Part II, Chapter 6. Pages 95-113.</p>
<p>Braddock, R., Lloyd-Jones, R., &amp; Schoer, L. (1963). &#8220;Research in written composition&#8221;. Urbana, IL: National Council of Teachers of English.</p>
<p>Graves, R. L. (Ed.). (1999). &#8220;Writing, teaching, learning: A sourcebook&#8221;. Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook.</p>
<p>Hairston, M. (1982). The winds of change: Thomas Kuhn and the revolution in the teaching of writing. &#8220;College Composition and Communication&#8221;, 33, pp. 76-88. In R. L. Graves, (Ed.), &#8220;Writing, teaching, learning: A sourcebook&#8221; (pp. 3-5). Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook.</p>
<p>Hillocks, G. (1984). What works in teaching composition: A meta-analysis of experimental treatment studies. &#8220;American Journal of Education&#8221;, 93, 133-170.</p>
<p>Jensen, J. M. (1993). What do we know about the writing of elementary school children? &#8220;Language Arts&#8221;, 70, pp. 290-94. In R. L. Graves, (Ed.), &#8220;Writing, teaching, learning: A sourcebook&#8221; (pp. 25-32). Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook.</p>
<p>Petrosky, A. R., &amp; Bartholomae, D. (Eds.). (1986). &#8220;The teaching of writing: Eighty-fifth yearbook of the National Society for the Study of Education&#8221;. Part II. Chicago, IL: University of Chicago Press.</p>
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