Daily Oral Language was so hot for so long… but it has fallen on some hard times. It’s still popular but it seems there is quite a backlash against it. It hasn’t really panned out according to “the research.” That being said many, many teachers simply love it. You’ll find out why.

I’ve personally always liked it. Why? Because it’s fun! Read on to find out how to make it more than just fun and MAXIMIZE your D.O.L. time. 

If you are really serious about creating “a class of writers,” be sure to find out about the “Pattern Based Writing: Quick and Easy Essay” writing program on the homepage.

Why Daily Oral Language is Fun – Have you ever seen someone beautifully dressed… and what did you notice? The tiny stain on their shirt! Psychologically we are wired to like to “find what is wrong.” It’s fun for us. It’s fun now… but “back on the savannah” this ability served a real purpose. It was life and death. If you couldn’t figure out what was wrong with a situation… you didn’t last long. I’ve heard some people say that Daily Oral Language is boring. For higher grade levels it could be. There are Daily Oral Language programs up through at least Grade 12. I could see it get a little boring… day after day… year after year… My students have always thought it’s fun. Me too!

Research Pro Daily Oral Language - Regular skills practice improves skill retention and delivers the message to students that the skills that they are developing are important. Allowing students to build understanding over time with continuous review has proven to be an effective way to maintain skills and an understanding of critical concepts. Content delivered incrementally promotes continuous learning and understanding thus building and maintaining knowledge. (Baratta-Lorton, 1994).

Research Con Daily Oral Language - Teaching conventions in isolation is ineffective at best, because students need opportunities to apply their knowledge of conventions to their writing. Even daily oral language activities are a waste of time for students without procedural knowledge of how and when to use conventions in writing. Consequently, the most effective way to teach conventions is to integrate instruction directly into the writing process. (Kathleen Cali, Learn NC)

Can we agree with both? Because I do!

The Mathematics of Time - Does it work or doesn’t it work is always a mathematical equation involving time. If you’re spending an hour on Daily Oral Language, it is probably not a good use of time. If you get it done and discussed FAST … you are probably getting a lot of bang for your buck. You want to make sure that you get your implementation system down to a science. Daily Oral Language is intended to be a quick daily review… 5, 10, 15… 20 minutes max.

The Perfectionist Time Trap and Solutions – Perfectionists are going to want to give direct instruction on every concept covered. If you give a lot of direct instruction on every concept covered, it’s going to take a lot of time. This is the wrong way to use Daily Oral Language. There are other, better direct instruction ways to teach grammar skills. Avoid this perfectionist time trap! (If you are falling into this time trap keep reading because I offer lots of solutions.)

Grammar Instruction or Proofreading Practice – A common criticism of Daily Oral Language is that it really only teaches proofreading while what it is supposed to be doing is reviewing and teaching grammar skills. This analysis is quite valid, however not exactly true. Lots of teachers and lots of students have been thrilled with the results they have gotten. It fits into their day just perfect and they know how to get the most out of it. The better a teacher understands ALL the grammar rules… the more they can get out of Daily Oral Language. The better a teacher is at teaching grammar off of the top of their head… the more teaching moments they will be able to find and maximize.

How Can You Review Skills that Students Haven’t Learned?  – Another common criticism of Daily Oral Language is that the exercises contain too many skills that students have not yet learned. This leads to too much time being spent on direct instruction for which there are better resources other than a teacher’s sheer brilliance and sweat. Here are three solutions.

•  Solution 1: You pre-teach weeks ahead. Know what coming up and make sure you have given direct instruction on important concepts. You probably won’t be able to get to all of them… but you can greatly increase the effectiveness and reduce frustration this way. (It would be great if there were a daily oral language grammar direct instruction program that quickly pre-taught the daily oral language skills a few weeks ahead. Spiraling is a MAJOR key to both learning and teaching!)
• Solution 2: You pre-teach right before you do the Daily Oral Language. There is not much point in doing an exercise for which a large majority will fail so why not pre-teach a rule or two. You can even bring some fun into it by making it a challenge. (Ex. Here are two grammar rules. Just one of them is in today’s assignment. See if you can figure out which one it is.) 
• Solution 3: You go down a grade. Lots of people do. The key to Daily Oral Language is that it is a fast review. If you can’t do it fast you shouldn’t be using Daily Oral Language. You are better off with a direct instruction grammar program that spirals the learning. Daily Oral Language has value if you can do it fast… so go down a grade. 

Bridging the Gap to What’s Important With Teachable Moments – There is a “game” aspect to Daily Oral Language and that’s what makes it fun. “Find the mistake” is a little different than “memorize this rule.” The teacher will need to bridge the gap to the state test and to real writing. Half of Daily Oral Language’s success is about having the opportunity to find lots of “teachable moments.”

Busy Work or Real Benefit – Teachers have a lot to do! As such, teachers often have a task that they like to get done while students do the Daily Oral Language. A real complement to Daily Oral Language is that teachers know their students will be ENGAGED enough so that they can get something done. The effect of this is that some teachers may use D.O.L. in a way that may be considered “busy work.” I don’t mean that exactly in a bad way, though. There are things that teachers need to get done… such as taking role… and you need a routine that has value and for which you know kids will be engaged in. My experience is that like most things, you get out… what you put into it. Are you prepared for the day’s D.O.L. lesson? Have you looked over the lesson and studied the errors? Will you be able to teach and maybe give an extension on each and every rule… or at least one? Do you pre-teach any rules? Even though the teacher is getting something done, they can still be fully prepared beforehand and maximize the benefits of Daily Oral Language.

Daily Oral Language in Elementary Vs. Middle School - There is a definitely a difference between elementary & middle school when it comes to Daily Oral Language. Most of the criticism I see is coming from middle school teachers. That makes sense. When you have an hour with students… and you spend 15 minutes on Daily Oral Language…. It is hard to justify the time. Furthermore, middle school students likely did Daily Oral Language in elementary school. They may see it as doing the exact same thing they did in elementary school… and they don’t like that. A key difference between elementary school D.O.L. and middle school D.O.L. is that elementary school teachers are with the same students all day. Elementary school teachers need to break up the day. There is an art to this. For elementary school teachers D.O.L. can easily serve its purpose and with time to spare!

It’s Too Easy for My Kids – Two simple solutions. One, move up to a higher grade level. Two, pick up the pace. D.O.L. is meant to be a quick review… so see how quick you can make it.  

Classroom Management – D.O.L. is a very good classroom management strategy. This is no secret. Teachers have the kids come in and get started on something that will engage them and get them settled down. I think this reason alone has played a huge part in D.O.L.’s popularity. In many student populations… it’s a great success and a great start just to get the kids to come in and get focused on learning. D.O.L. has the power to achieve this!

The Answers Vary – This may be more common with Daily Language Review (D.L.R.) and it may be more common at different grade levels. If you have 30 students with 15 different correct answers and a few more incorrect answers… and everyone wants to know if theirs is correct… this can be a problem. That can take a lot of time. Remember, D.L.R. is supposed to be a fast review. Your 5-10 minute lesson just turned into a 25-45 minutes lesson. Establish an understanding with your students that you will look at a few answers and then move on. They need to compare theirs with the correct answers.

State Testing – How frustrating is it when it’s test time and you have worked so hard, and you discover that there are areas that you neglected, skipped, or did not think were that important. D.O.L. is a good guard against this. D.O.L. simply brings… peace of mind. 

Built in Spiraling for ESL Students – A great thing about Daily Oral Language is that very few skills fall through the cracks. Not only does it spiral the concepts but it spirals them fast. Having learned a second language, all I can say is that when learning a second language you want to spiral, spiral, spiral… the learning that is. It is the only thing that keeps a person sane. Teachers can harness the power of the built in spiraling of D.O.L.!

Daily Oral Language Vs. Grammar Books Vs. Grammar Supplements – The purpose and intent for each one of these is different. Don’t confuse these different purposes and don’t try to make your D.O.L. time more than it is supposed to be. Each day you need to supplement your D.O.L. with a little direct instruction, but D.O.L. is not a direct instruction program.

Disconnected from Real Writing - This is a big, big con and this is why you want to make sure you don’t invest too much time in it. If “Daily Oral Language does not work”… this is the reason why. However, skilled teachers can bridge the gap, and gaps will need to be bridged. Children will not transfer the skills over the way teachers would like them to. 

Success Now Vs. Success Over Time – It’s incremental progress. You are not going to see mastery of any one skill anytime soon. If you are looking for overnight success it is not going to happen. You do need a little patience and faith.

Daily D.O.L. Vs. D.O.L. From Time to Time – Yes, I know it is called Daily Oral Language and I know the premise is based on the premise that reviewing skills consistently over time leads to success over time. However, even if you don’t use D.O.L. daily… it can still be one more tool in the tool belt. I know some teachers feel they get benefit doing it once a week. I know one teacher that uses a grammar program four times a week and on Friday they do a whole week’s worth of Daily Oral Language.  She calls it “D.O.L. Day.”

“Daily Review of Skills Theory” – Like a lot of “theories” people get too caught up in the “theory.” The “daily skills practice people” would have you practices a quick set of skills for every subject across the board. The “workshop” people would have you doing a “Writer’s Workshop” type workshop for every subject across the board. I’m one of those “balance, balance, balance, and the art of teaching” teachers. I can’t imagine that doing a “Daily Review of Skills” program for every single subject is a great use of time. 

Three Ways to Implement Daily Oral Language:

1. Teacher writes it on the front board. Students write it correctly on paper or in a journal. The class corrects it and discusses it as students come up to the board one by one adding proofreading marks and correcting errors.
2. Use an overhead projector, projector from the computer, or an ELMO Projector. All three of these technologies do allow the teacher to mark-up/correct the D.O.L. With some it’s easier than others. Don’t have students copy it from the source the wrong way first and then correct it. Have them write it out the correct way only.
3. Teacher makes copies and passes it out. Have it waiting on the students’ desks when they return from recess or hand it to them as they walk in. They add proofreading marks and write it out correctly.

A Good Recommendation for Parents Who Want to Help Their Children – From time to time parents ask you how they can help their child. D.O.L. is an excellent recommendation. For a parent, it’s the right amount of work and it sends all the right messages. In a way it’s neutral. Parents aren’t looking for their own child’s mistakes. Together they can correct someone else’s mistakes. Parents like it.

Practicing Errors – Some say it doesn’t work because it’s putting the focus on errors. Well, that same theory would say “don’t proofread because when you find the mistake you will be focusing on errors.”  On the other hand I strongly believe that in life one should focus on where one wants to go instead of what they want to avoid. “Billy, don’t step in that puddle.” What does Billy do? He steps in the puddle. I would never have students write anything the wrong way. If that’s what people are doing… STOP!

Builds Community - Here’s another psychological reason for D.O.L.’s success. They call it the “common enemy” or “us against them” mentality.  With D.O.L. teachers and students alike are all united together against “that silly mistake maker.” “Oh… can you believe THEY did that? WE would never do that! We’re better than that! We’ll fix it!”

Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.) Vs. Daily Language Review (D.L.R.) – There is a difference between these two programs. You will likely prefer one over the other. D.O.L. in particular seems to continue to come out with new programs and new versions, so be sure to check out samples from all the programs before you decide on one.

Authentic Daily Oral Language

Common sense lets us know that when you attach real meaning to something it has more value. When we have “a class of writers” why would we want to spend time with fake mistakes when we can grow from examining our own writing?

I know this is the direction I have been headed for many, many years… and it is the direction for which the research supports. Even still, I like to have a Daily Oral Language or Daily Language Review handy. Why? Because it’s fun, it can break up the day, and it can create community by focusing on THEIR mistakes and not ours!  

If you are really serious about creating “a class of writers,” check out the “Pattern Based Writing: Quick and Easy Essay” writing program.

Deciding on and Giving the Assignment

Step 1: Spend time on the computer clearly outlining the assignment. You may want to include a rubric detailing how the report will be graded and detailing what is expected. Give detailed directions on how you expect students’ sources to be cited and exactly how you will determine what you consider to be plagiarism. Be sure to discuss exactly what the report must cover along with the formal style that you may expect. Give each student a printed copy of this.

Researching Main Ideas and Sub-Topics

Step 2: Have students find sources of information for their subject. (Library, internet, encyclopedias, textbooks)

Step 3: Students now quickly skim and scan their resources getting a quick overview of their entire subject. Students need to learn the information as they research the material. Writing the report in their own words is hard to do if they don’t understand the material. (Teach students how to avoid plagiarism while they are young. Learning the material as students research helps students write their report in their own words.)

Step 4: Have students use a separate sheet of paper for each of their sources. At the top of each sheet of paper have students write the bibliography information for one source that they will be using.

Step 5: Students now skim and scan each source writing important big picture main ideas and main sub-topics which they feel they could build a report around. They should put a strong focus on headings, chapter titles, and table of contents. Have them write these ideas down in their own words by paraphrasing.

Outlining and Organizing

Step 6: Have students look over their sheets of paper that have all their big picture main ideas and sub-topics. Have them decide which main ideas and sub-topics they will want to build their report around. (Continue to urge students to learn the material.)

Step 7: Now students build a perfect puzzle of main ideas and sub-topics which will outline their report. In other words, they create an outline of what they want to focus on in their report. (It’s okay if they decide they need to change some of their main ideas and sub-topics as they continue to research their subject.) 

Researching for Facts

Step 8: Now students research and take notes. They can continue to use the same sheets of paper that they have their main ideas on, OR they can use an index card for each main idea or sub-topic. If you use an index card with the main ideas you need to be sure to mark which source you got your information from. Students do not write their notes in complete sentences. Have students write their notes in “Frankenstein Writing.” (Nile River – 4185 miles long – longest river in world) Sounds like Frankenstein, doesn’t it? Frankenstein writing is fast, and it makes sure students will later write their report in their own words.

Writing the Report

Step 9: Students follow their outline and use their notes to write their report. Students can research more if needed, but no using books when writing the report. Make sure students understand how to give credit to their sources of information. Students should also understand how to write a proper introduction, body, and conclusion for their report.

Step 10: Students create a bibliography page giving credit to all of their sources of information.

Proofreading and Editing

Step 11: For proofreading and editing, it’s best to give a short cooling off period so students will be able to look at all of their hard work objectively. If students hold off for 1-3 days, they will do a much better job.

Step 12: Students proofread and edit their report.

Step 13: Recopy for a fabulous report! (This may not always be a great use of time. However, sometimes it’s good for students to see a fantastic final copy on nice white paper.)

Sharing and Displaying

Step 14: Share! Students read their entire report to at least one other person. Also have an “Author’s Chair” where students can read a part of their report to the entire class. 

Step 15: Display! There are lots of ways to display reports. You can put them up on the bulletin board. You may want to put them in a binder to create a class book or have students create a cover for their own report and you have a classroom library! You may want to show them off when it’s time for back to school night, parent conferences, or open house. Consider all this before you send them home.  

Fantastic report! Great job!

• Do Use Passive Voice - You the author stay hidden. Focus on the facts and issues of the subject you are writing about. What do you think about those facts and issues? Not important. However, the facts and issues are important. The cause and effect of those facts and issues are important. You show others what you think is important by the facts and issues you include, as well as the topics you choose to write about. However, in your report writing… try to keep yourself hidden.

• Don’t Use Personal Pronouns – Rarely if ever, use “I, we, my, mine, our, ours, you, yours.”

• Do Use Third Person – He, she, his, hers, it, its, them, their

• Do Use Correct Academic and Technical Language – When you take notes and when you paraphrase, keep the correct technical words. You may want to define these technical words for your reader, but don’t substitute a lot of simple words for the correct academic and technical language. 

• Don’t Use Casual Language – Casual language includes both the words you use and the way you talk to your reader. Above in “Passive Voice” it says, “What do you think about those facts and issues? Not important.” That is casual. Casual can be fun and can be used to create and maintain interest, however use it very sparingly in report writing.

• Avoid Emotional Power Verbs. Be objective. Be Neutral.
Famous Quote: The Facts, just the facts, ma’am. (Dragnet)

Example:
Objective: The government acted quickly in order to remedy the situation.
Emotional Power Verbs: The government sprang into action in order to save-the-day.

In the real world of state standards and standardized tests, it can be a little difficult for a teacher to get their head around what Writer’s Workshop is. As long as I have been teaching there has been a continuing push towards making teachers more and more accountable for student achievement.

With Writer’s Workshop teachers are accountable… but they are also asked to take a leap of faith into the world of flexibility. The teachers are asked to believe that Writer’s Workshop is the best way to get the results that EVERYONE wants for the students they teach.

In this multipart series on Writer’s Workshop you will:
• Learn what Writer’s Workshop is
• Discover how you may already be using certain aspects of Writer’s Workshop
• Learn some tips for implementing Writer’s Workshop
• Learn how to avoid some of the stress and traps of implementing Writer’s Workshop

I am a teacher… and the realities of REAL teaching in actual classrooms will always be a part of everything you will read in this series.

What is Writer’s Workshop?

Here are “the parts” of Writer’s Workshop. We will examine each of the following parts and will explore the pros, the cons, the problem areas, and the areas of benefit for each stage of Writer’s Workshop.

1. Mini-lesson – Direct instruction lasting between 5-15 minutes.
2. Status of the Class – As students begin work on their individual writing project, the teacher quickly monitors the status of each student. Where are the students in their writing and how will they be spending their writing period? (2-3 minutes)
3. Writing and Conferencing – Students write and teachers either write or conference. The teachers can conference with individual students or small groups. Teachers are encourage to spend at least some workshop time actually writing themselves in order to model what authors do. (25- 40 minutes)
4. Sharing – There are a variety of ways to share. Author’s chair, peer editing, and reading to at least one other student are popular methods. (5-10 minutes)

Using the Writing Process in Writer’s Workshop

It is important to note that the entire Writer’s Workshop process incorporates the entire Writing Process. Here is a simple version of the writing process outlined for you:

1. Prewriting
2. Drafting
3. Revising
4. Proofreading
5. Publishing

The actual writing process is not a straight line and there are other models of the writing process which more accurately reflect the TRUE writing process. This five step model is “the classic version” and one which is easy for students to grasp. Essentially, this is what students will be implementing during Writer’s Workshop. 

Using the Six Traits of Effective Writing in Writer’s Workshop

Also worth mentioning is that a natural part or integration of Writer’s Workshop is the Six Traits of Effective Writing model.

The Six Traits of Effective Writing are:
1. Ideas
2. Organization
3. Voice
4. Word Choice
5. Sentence Fluency
6. Conventions

Let’s Use More and More and More Workshops!

 How important is Writer’s Workshop to creating fantastic writers? Proponents propose that it is indispensible to creating students who can truly write. But before we go hog-wild on Writer’s Workshop here are some more workshops where the proponents propose the dire necessity of the workshop.

• Reader’s Workshop – Your students will develop independence in reading and become lifelong readers outside of the classroom. Your students will conference with peers and teachers yet the focus is always on becoming independent learners. Reader’s Workshop often becomes the favorite part of a student’s day!

• Independent Work Time (IWT) – Students must have a time each day where they work productively in groups while the teacher meets the needs of individual children. Teachers also need a time where they can challenge advanced students and give support to struggling students… and the Independent Work Time Workshop is the method you should use!

• Math Workshop – Meet the needs of your children! Boring textbooks leave behind the students who can’t keep up while too much hands-on math ensures that all your students will fall behind. We have the perfect solution. It’s “Math Workshop!” We have uniquely found the right balance!

I think you will be able to find a “workshop theory” for every single subject and every single concept that a teacher might teach.

The Truth about Writer’s Workshop

The truth about Writer’s Workshop is that teachers have used workshop strategies for years and years without a lot of the rhetoric associated with “Writer’s Workshop.”

Many workshop strategies are used across the curriculum in order to:
• differentiate instruction
• scaffold instruction
• meet student’s needs

Sometimes people get carried away with “philosophies.” Can anyone say “out of touch administrators” or “professional development guru?” It seems a lot of decision makers have not been running a classroom for a long, long time…

Personally I use many aspects of Writer’s Workshop… and… I also know I have to use my time wisely!

There is not enough time in the day for workshop after workshop and still teach the curriculum and meet state standards and prepare for the upcoming standardized test.

But… it’s great to know about all these theories and strategies so we can continue to grow as teachers!

Be sure to:
1. Check back for Part 2 of this series
2. Read “The Controversy over Writer’s Workshop in Elementary and Middle School”
3. Go to the homepage and discover “Pattern Based Writing: Quick and Easy Essay.”

Teaching writing… in the world of teaching… is “controversial.” So few teachers really feel they know how to teach “writing” well. Everyone feels they teach “grammar” just fine, but writing… This feeling of uncertainty creates defensiveness and high emotions.

But even in the world of teaching writing… just the mention of “Writer’s Workshop” will get people all worked up. I know of one teacher’s forum on the internet in which a VERY heated debate over Writer’s Workshop has lasted for years. Tempers rise, accusations fly… and then finally someone says, “What exactly is Writer’s Workshop? I don’t get it…”

Writer’s Workshop: A History of Controversy

Let’s face it, “Writer’s Workshop” was born in the adult world and has been transferred over to the world of elementary and middle school writing. “Writer’s Workshop” in the adult world can bring up vivid images of hippy-communes and groups of beatniks writing in Greenwich Village. (I’ve seen some classrooms that use Writer’s Workshop which aren’t much different!)

Writer’s Workshop Works… But Only for Some Kinds of Teachers

Some teachers swear by Writer’s Workshop… others swear AT Writer’s Workshop. I think it’s good to understand a few different “kinds of teachers” as it will help you to decide if Writer’s Workshop is for you. I hate to categorize teachers, but when it comes to Writer’s Workshop, some will have great success and others will completely flop.

“To thine own self be true!”
                                             William Shakespeare

Two out of these four kinds of teachers will have success with Writer’s Workshop.  Which two do you think it will be?

1. flowery teachers
2. brass-tacks teachers
3. flowery talking teachers who are really brass-tacks teachers
4. brass-tacks talking teachers who are really flowery teachers

Answer: Teachers number 3 and 4.

Here’s Why:
1. flowery teachers – School and teaching writing is not about running a hippy commune where “it’s all good.” We are teaching students to be successful at school. Sooner or later being successful at school involves doing things correctly. With a flowery teacher who is not keeping an eye on results, too many kids will slip through the cracks and won’t MASTER the skills needed to be successful students.
2. brass-tacks teachers – This teacher wants results. They want results that can be measured and measured now. Writer’s Workshop will be an exercise in frustration for them. They will not have the patience to watch “progress over time” and “developing the love for writing” is not something they consider to be measurable.
3. flowery talking teachers who are really brass-tacks teachers - These teachers will have the greatest success with Writer’s Workshop. They buy into the philosophy and are firecrackers when it comes to monitoring what students are doing.
4. brass-tacks talking teachers who are really flowery teachers – These teachers will have success because at their heart they want kids to enjoy school. Writer’s Workshop will be a fun change of pace for their students. They will run a tight-ship during Writer’s Workshop and they will get results. It will be effective… but it will come a little bit at the expense of students developing a true love for the art of writing.

Be sure to check back for:
1. What Exactly is Writer’s Workshop? 
2. Tips, Tricks, Pros and Cons of Using Writer’s Workshop in the Classroom

1. Challenge students’ thinking and writing skills
2. Create interest in writing and inspire creativity
3. Get reluctant writers writing
4. Help students develop the habit of writing every day
5. Practice for writing assessments
6. You are giving a classroom assignment that involves writing

Kinds of Writing Prompts for Elementary and Middle School Writing

• Essay writing prompts – Students will explain something from their point of view. It will be explained as they see the world.
• Expository writing prompts – Students will produce writing in an explanatory or informative nature.
• Narrative writing prompts – Students will narrate either a personal story or a fiction story.
• Persuasive writing prompts – Students will take a stand and logically argue a position.
• Creative writing prompts – Students will use their imagination and enter the world of fantasy.
• Journal writing prompts – Students will explore their experiences, feelings, thoughts, and emotions… Students will explore who they are and the life they live.

Writing Prompts across the Curriculum

Often teachers think of writing across the curriculum simply as “giving an assignment.” When they are teaching social studies, they gave a social studies assignment, and now it’s science, so they will give a science assignment…

The truth is “A WRITING TEACHER” teaches writing:
1. So that our students may fall in love with writing.
2. So that WE get to read good writing.
3. So that our students may thank us when they receive their Pulitzer Prize in Literature.
4. So that our students will become effective communicators.
5. So that our students will write well across the curriculum, so that THEY will be HIGHLY SUCCESSFUL students!

Don’t wait for language arts to “teach writing.” Give “writing prompts” across the curriculum.

Tips and Tricks for Using Writing Prompts

1. Have a purpose or objective for giving the writing prompt. Be sure to read “How to Use Writing Prompts in Teaching Writing.”
2. Make the prompt simple, yet complex. This is what is at the heart being both engaging and compelling. Simple enough that they understand it and can write about it confidently, but complex enough that students will engage in new thoughts and new ways of thinking.
3. Vary the type and purpose of your writing prompts. Predictable is the opposite of compelling and engaging.
4. Be prepared. Do not create writing prompts on the spur of the moment.

Letting the Class Create the Writing Prompts: Pros and Cons

Pros:
• Kids will think of things that adults never would! (or at least in a way that adults never would)
• You get to learn more about what your students think about and what interests them.
• It is great fun to have students create the prompts. There is usually an air of excitement in the class and the discussion is almost always lively.
• It inspires students and engages the group. What they think about has value!

Cons:
• Can take on too strong a “voting” or “popularity contest” aspect.
• Not all the students will like the prompt, especially when the prompt is not coming from their inner circle of friends.
• Who exactly is in charge here? Students may start to wonder…
• Students may start to perceive it as busy work. “Boy, the teacher doesn’t have to do anything… and we just write and write and write…”
• The same ideas start to repeat themselves. Sometimes students change just one or two words from the last writing prompt.

My experience is that it is best to set a routine for letting students choose the writing prompts. You want to keep all the pros without any of the cons. (Kids like to know what they can expect.)
• From time-to-time
• Once a week
• Every day

Having Students Individually Choose their Own Topics to Write About: Pros and Cons

Pros:
• Gives student the freedom to develop their own writing voice and their own style of writing.
• Teaches self-reliance. Students must learn that often people are not going to tell them what to do. However, it is still their job to not only produce the work, but to also “wow them.”
• Students will likely choose a subject they are an expert in. This will give them confidence in their writing. They will likely develop certain writing skills quicker since they do not have to learn the information at the same time they are doing the writing.
• Many students enjoy the freedom. For many students, this is the way they will develop a true love for writing.
 
Cons:
• Some will want to write about the same thing every single time. If you don’t closely monitor their writing… many students will.
• Some students will prefer to write about rather superficial things without exploring any real “deep thoughts.” (Video game #1, video game #2, movie #1, video game #3, movie #2, TV show #1…)
• Students may perceive it as busy work. (Having students read it to at least one other person reduces this.)

When you are having students choose what they want to write about you really need to set up what you expect (and hope) the students will get from this. Students that love to write won’t need an explanation. Those that don’t love to write… yet… do need an explanation… and some inspiration…

“A paragraph is a group of sentences about one main idea or topic. A paragraph usually contains between 5-8 sentences about that one main idea or topic. All of your sentences in the paragraph must be about that one main idea or topic. These supporting detail sentences are supporting the author’s main idea. The main idea is what is most important in that paragraph. It is what the author truly wants you to understand.”

Explain, demonstrate, and practice… It would take me a long time to get the kinds of results I wanted for my students, and the longer the writing assignment, the more the rules would fly out the window…

“Listen kids, when you want to write about a new main idea, you must start a new paragraph. Does this make sense?” They would all gleefully cheer, “Yes!”

They would try to show me how well they understood by writing an entire page and a half about ONE MAIN IDEA. That’s how well they understood…

“Okay kids, let me explain a paragraph one more time. You see… a paragraph can give information about one main idea, it can explain one topic or you can give your opinion about the main idea or topic. Be sure to put the sentences in an order that will make sense to your reader. You want it to be a logical and natural sounding order. Does this make sense?”

I would be quite enthusiastic when the class would greet me with a resounding, “Yes, Mr. Barger! We get it! Can we start writing now?! Can we show you how well we understand?”

Now the students were able to produce TWO PAGES that contained TWO PARAGRAPHS!

“Listen kids… I want you to choose a topic sentence and I want you to think about that topic sentence… and choose JUST three details that support that main idea. These are supporting details and they support the main idea or topic sentence. Your topic sentence is a kind of general statement about the topic and the supporting details are more specific. Does this make sense?”

I think you know the answer… Luckily I am very patient.

“Listen kids… a topic sentence can be anywhere in the paragraph, but most often the topic sentence is the FIRST SENTENCE in a paragraph. It’s true that sometimes the topic sentence is in the middle of a paragraph and sometimes it is at the end of a paragraph, but USUALLY it is the first sentence in a paragraph. Let’s keep it simple.”

The children would be very excited that I wanted to keep things simple.

“Children, I want you to put your topic sentence first and I want you to follow that topic sentence with 3- 5 supporting details and then I want you to write a conclusion sentence. For now, your conclusion sentence can either sum up what the entire paragraph was about, or it can repeat the topic sentence in a new and creative way. How does this sound? Does all this make sense? Oh… and we have state testing coming up, and I want you all to really concentrate on great paragraphs, because they are really important on this state testing that we are going to be doing. Okay…?…? Okay??”

Students would assure me they understood. In fact, they could repeat back every single word I had said! It was almost impressive…

However, students would continue to struggle with paragraphs. Basically, a run on sentence is the easiest way to see that children don’t understand what a paragraph is. If a sentence goes on and on, they don’t understand what a paragraph is…

Often the source of the difficulty is something like, “What’s a topic?”

“Pattern Based Writing: Quick and Easy Essay” takes children from simple sentences to complete essays FAST and with AMAZING comprehension! It just makes sense to them…

The most important thing about a writing prompt is for the teacher to have a purpose for the writing prompt. Many teachers don’t think a lot about what their purpose is when they put up a writing prompt.

The thought process usually goes about as far as:

• I want them to write about something that they will have an interest in.
• I want them to write about something that will inspire them.
• I want them to write about something that they will think is fun.

A Little Extra Thought and You Will Get Writing that is More Thought Provoking (Both you and your students will think so!)

The reason teachers use lesson plans is because we want to make the most of our students time. We need to know what it is that we wish to accomplish with our lesson. We want to have a goal, or an objective. If we don’t know where we are going… we will be on the road to nowhere.

Using a writing prompt is no different. We can define our purpose and objectives in many different ways, and I’ll touch on a few.

The Wrong Way to Use a Writing Prompt (a.k.a. Quick! Think!)

Be honest… have you ever gone through this thought process?

“What am I going to have the kids write about? Quick! Think! Hmm… Okay… kids… what you are going to write about today is… hmm… okay… what it is… you are going to write about… umm… what did you… or what… no… describe a time when…”

The thinking that went into your creation of the writing prompt is likely to be reflected in the creation of the writing that the students do. If you don’t think it’s that important, they won’t think it’s that important. Even if they don’t observe exactly how you created the writing prompt, students have a sixth sense for what they perceive as “busy work.” 

Here Are a Few Ways that You Can More Clearly Define Your Purpose, Goal, or Objective When You Give Students a Writing Prompt:

1. You Can Base Your Purpose on the Kind of Growth You Wish Your Students to Experience

• Write in a new and unique way. (In a way they have never written before.)
• Focus on, explore, or expand their creativity
• Break the mold of their previous writing and expand their horizons
• Focus on or experiment with structure
• Focus on or explore word usage
• Focus on or explore the imagination
• Focus on or explore their thoughts
• Focus on or explore their feelings
• Think about their own thinking along with how they learn
• Learn the subject material by writing (Writing across the curriculum)

2. You Can Base Your Purpose on Bloom’s Taxonomy

• You want them to know (facts, information)
• You want them to comprehend or understand (internalize)
• You want them to apply what they have learned or know (use the information)
• You want them to analyze information (what is the significance of this information)
• You want them to synthesis information (kind of like creating new information from old information)
• You want them to evaluate (Is this good/bad, true/false?)

3. You Can Base Your Purpose on Common Essay Structures

• You want them to compare and contrast something (compare and contrast essay)
• You want them to give information about something (informational essay)
• You want them to describe something (descriptive essay)
• You want them to evaluate something (evaluative essay)
• You want them to give the cause and effect of something (cause and effect essay)
• You want them to tell a personal story (personal narrative essay)
• You want them to tell a story that has a point of view (narrative essay)
• You want them to describe a process (process essay)
• You want them to follow a line of argumentative reasoning through to its logical conclusion (argumentative essay)
• You want them to persuade someone about something (persuasive essay)
• You want them to critique something (critical essay)

Check back to read these upcoming articles on “Writing Prompts.”

1. Easy, Fast, and Fantastic Ways to Create Writing Prompts that Will Engage Your Students
2. Teaching Writing Across the Curriculum: Remembering that a Writing Assignment in Any Subject is a Writing Prompt

The truth is that there is very little difference between a personal narrative essay and a fiction story. After all, who doesn’t look at a fiction story and then look at the author and say, “Oh, I didn’t know…” And the author says, “Oh, no, it’s not autobiographical. It’s just a… story.” And then we think, “Me thinks thou doth protest too much!”

A good story is a good story, whether it’s from real life or the imagination. Many, many (if not most) good stories are told from real life knowledge. The real skill is not in being able to INVENT a good story, but in being able to TELL a good story. That is a skill worth having!

Professional authors largely write about, what they know about. Our students should as well. Natalie Goldberg, author of the classic “Writing Down the Bones: Freeing the Writer Within” said, “We must remember that everything is ordinary and extraordinary.”

As teachers we need to help students find the extraordinary in their own ordinary lives. Actually, that’s hard! However it is easy to teach kids to see that everything is extraordinary.

Ex. “Strange Happenings at the Dinner Table”

“Pattern Based Writing: Quick & Easy Essay” does not really get involved with “fiction writing.” It does get quite involved with “story telling” and “creating interest.” Many aspects of the program directly address finding the extraordinary in the ordinary, and that nothing is really ordinary… or extraordinary… (Often when you take something that is “extraordinary” and try to make it sound “extraordinary” it loses its effect and becomes… ordinary. In other words, do you like “hype”?)

However, what I’ve seen is that when students are writing regularly in a way that they take pride in, they often discover this aspect of writing all by themselves.

What happens is that there are days when they must simply write about what they see in front of them. Nothing “extraordinary” has happened recently, so they turn to the “ordinary.” Very often it turns into their most satisfying writing. They start to see the beauty in “The Messy Teacher’s Desk,” or wonder about “The Secret Life of Bobby: Why He is Late to School Every Single Day!”

In short, teach students to use real life to create captivating stories!